Moon Connector

by Baby Rainbow   Jul 7, 2015


Distance:
a million miles filled with heart-drowning pain,
when you are far away from someone you love.

The Moon:
a point of focus,
a circle of hope,
a connection of comfort -
knowing that no matter how far apart we are,
we still share this shining light in the midnight sky.

And tonight as the night blooms
and I sit upon the solid rocks of the sea,
listening to the sound of waves
sharing secrets with the sand,

I wonder if I close my eyes,
will you come and visit me?

Saffie
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4/7/15

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  • 9 years ago

    by Meme

    Weekly Contest Judging comment:
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    I think everyone who reads this poem will definitely without a doubt feel a connection to it. Who hasn't looked at the moon and thought of it as the only thing that linked them to the one they love? I for myself do it a lot. In the moments of extreme happiness, so in the moments of depression and sadness. When I am alone I just look up and think "at least where are looking at the same moon, where standing under the same sky" sometimes that helps to go through whatever it is that I go through.

    Loved it!

  • 9 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    That's epic saffie... I love this.. The moon you can see from anywhere... I've never seen the moon used like this before so to me it was very unique... I can put a thing wrong with this piece I think it's perfect and worth a nomination.... Seriously beautiful saffie

  • 9 years ago

    by Angie

    Oh this is beautiful, I, as you, wonder, each time I look up at this most amazing orb....

    she brings such comfort and peace to a lonely heart and joy and happiness when the sadness tries to creep in

    I have many times, recently, been in tears only for them to dry when I see her moon beams and feel her energy, knowing that my loved one is near even though they are no longer "here"

    and I wonder... are you, my sweet cupcake, thinking of me as I am thinking of you and enjoying your company as I close my eyes and dream under this beautiful moon...

    thank you for this, it makes my heart smile