Two Beauties Within One Iris

This is so beautiful. I was drawn in by the title and am so glad I was. It is as peaceful as the first line and has an ethereal quality in both wording and flow. Reading this was indeed a 'precious moment in time'.

ANother beautiful write. This really is such a calming, lovely piece of work. "a beautiful moment to capture in the camera of our mind." The alliteration works really well there and sets the soothing tone throughout.