by Angie
Keep dancing :) |
Really beautiful saffie made me think of a women in a white gown dancing on a cliff under the moonlight... |
by Ben Pickard
What a beautifully written poem, full of sadness and hope. I love the personification of the ocean waves and the whole last stanza is perfect. |
by Naughtymouse
Oh Little Thistle I Wish I could explain how much i like this poem, in terms of word choice and format etc it is beautifully written, your descriptive writing in this is magnificent but the emotional journey you take the reader on is wonderful, from the first stanza of setting an emotional "scene" to the second of doubts of her worthyness of life which is there because ofhow shes been treated, broken trust etc to the last stanza of an almost serene hope. |
by DarkLight
I like. |
This was an awesome write Saff. Loved it! |