Comments : Broken

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi,

    there is so much agony told and felt here. It is like after years of torment, there is only acceptance that release is in someone else s hands.

    Well done,

    Michael

    • 9 years ago

      by laila

      Thank you michael, precisely what I was trying to project.

  • 9 years ago

    by Claire Morris

    A powerful poem, full of deep emotions. I like it.
    Do not loose hope.
    Remember, 'When life gets too tough to stand, then just kneel'.