Comments : Beyond the Solstice

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Yes, Larry, I really can relate to this. My thoughts exactly. Wonderfully written.

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkLight

    I'm not sure how summer feels or how winter is, I like that you went far to paint a picture of mid july and what really to expect. Thank you.
    your poem is great and I love it all.

    • 9 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      I suppose you must not have much of seasonal change in Ethiopia. My wife comes from Nicaragua which is also in the tropics; they have two seasons: rainy and less rainy.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Ugh winter I hate it so much

  • 9 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Starting by the Tip of this poem, the title was very tempting and eye-catchy, not many are working on their title choices in the past period of time, and this has been a catcher. As for the content, other than its classy tone of poetry and depth, this poem unfolds the writers emotions infront of the reader in a tight manner leaving the reader uncertain how this piece will end.

    I am very fond of the word choice and wording, as well as the coherence in its general structure.

    A touching poem with a beautiful imagination. It's very beautiful to see how nature can connect to humans and move their emotions and thoughts.

    Really a very beautiful poem.