by Ben Pickard
Yes, Larry, I really can relate to this. My thoughts exactly. Wonderfully written. |
by DarkLight
I'm not sure how summer feels or how winter is, I like that you went far to paint a picture of mid july and what really to expect. Thank you. |
I suppose you must not have much of seasonal change in Ethiopia. My wife comes from Nicaragua which is also in the tropics; they have two seasons: rainy and less rainy. |
Ugh winter I hate it so much |
by Sunshine
Starting by the Tip of this poem, the title was very tempting and eye-catchy, not many are working on their title choices in the past period of time, and this has been a catcher. As for the content, other than its classy tone of poetry and depth, this poem unfolds the writers emotions infront of the reader in a tight manner leaving the reader uncertain how this piece will end. |