Oh my, how inspirational! I had never heard of this form, dear Michael.
Agree wholeheartedly on the message and also, you so cleverly have woven all words together with the poem you based this on. Well done:)

Take care,

Ingrid x

Well rhis was new for me.
That being said the subject matter is something close to my heart.
You covered the story of child soldiers very well with a healthy dose of anger and empathy.
Well done this was a good read.
Grant

Very cleverly written, Michael. A really creative piece and the subject matter is really well dealt with. An important issue that hits the reader hard in this piece

Very wordy and unobtrusive rhyme scheme, but otherwise a brilliant read with a strong message :)