Comments : Secrets

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I like the story told here daughter, it seems like you were writing about your past and then it started to turn into something else and I enjoyed read it. 5/5

    - Moria Bella Bair

  • 9 years ago

    by Jenn

    "Our souls are forever tainted
    just like the canvas is painted
    with the lies that we tell,
    and the secrets we keep."

    This is an amazing closer.
    I love how truly honest this poem is.
    It's slightly dark but so is life, just remember there is light too.

    Wonderfully written.