Letter of Grievance

by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-   Jul 15, 2015


Dear sir,
I wish to let
my pen tell
you what my
mouth can't
seem to say.

A simple darn
sentence wasn't
to much to ask
for, if you were
just going to
throw away all
the time that we
invested in us.

Alas, you just left
me feeling like a
fool, waiting, and
wasting my life pinning
for something that
I never had a claim to.

Did it make you proud
to ignore all my messages?

To be honest, to me
it was a coward's
way out and that wasn't fair
to me. Honesty was all
that I had asked for.

In the mean time I hope
you reflect on what you
did or rather what you
didn't do to make your
ex-partner happy because
until you see your mistakes you
won't know what you had till
it's gone....so goodbye love

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  • 9 years ago

    by Jenn

    "Alas, you just left
    me feeling like a
    fool, waiting, and
    wasting my life pinning
    for something that
    I never had claim to."

    I know this feeling so well..
    Reading this pulled some heart strings for me.
    But in such a beautiful way, wonderfully written.
    Loved it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Well Penned..

    This piece to me is why poetry means so much.

    Its always helps to get your feelings down onto paper and poetry makes an art form out of it. (which btw is this one)

    full of emotion!
    Loved it!

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Maybe its just my emotional state, but i read it as a letter to a disinterested and blase god who ignores all his peoples calls.

    but thats just my opinion.
    a brilliant write by the way, love the format

  • 9 years ago

    by JaneDoeWrites

    "Alas, you just left
    me feeling like a
    fool, waiting, and
    wasting my life pinning
    for something that
    I never had a claim to.

    Did it make you proud
    to ignore all my messages?"

    Girrlllllllll. This write is phenomenal! I wish I would have seen it sooner. It makes my heart hurt because I know what you are referencing here... but you stuck the ending, his loss :)

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Thank god we can always turn to poetry to vent, express our feelings and just to feel better.

    This is very heartfelt Mori, thank you very much for sharing this read :)

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