by Teria Jul 16, 2015
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Night skies so dark |
Good to see you back. A captivating write. |
by Baby Rainbow
I can see lots of potential in your work, I like the short lines, and the choppy pace, and also the idea of how you have inserted lots of fairy-tale like stuff like the horses, butterflies etc. |
by Ben Pickard
The first two lines really caught me - I love the idea of wolves being scared by the night skies - and then the rest of the poem unfurled excellently. Good write. |