by Michael D Nalley Jul 18, 2015
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The black hearse has been sent |
by Raven
Really enjoyed it. Got who and what it was about. Loved each stanza except the last. I don't know why I dislike "may as well be ready" line . Maybe it's confusing to me.... Because it's all about "said he" in the beginning of last stanza, and maybe line felt out of place ? feel something like "come with me" should be there. Regardless, it's a great poem 5/5 !!!! |
My immediate impression was a serial killer on death row, getting ready for his execution. In his mind his killings were "petty" because he has no regard for the victims. As they say, no atheists in a foxhole, so it seems with him. To me the last stanza is his unheeded conscience calling him to personally account for those he has killed and closing off hope. |
I hope this poem is not perceived as disrespectful to those family members of Bobbi Kristina Brown who as far as I know has not spoken to anyone except maybe the reaper. |
by Everlasting
When I read this poem what came to mind is those put to death. i like what was done with the refrain "I hope I'm ready". |
I hope this poem is not perceived as disrespectful to those family members of Bobbi Kristina Brown who as far as I know has not spoken to anyone except maybe the reaper. |
P.S. The last stanza was inspired by a contest prompt |