by Dancing Rivers Jul 20, 2015
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
For god so loved the world, |
by Claire Morris
I really love this poem. It's wonderful. |
Thank you claire for taking the time to read and comment on my work i appreciate that. |
by Ben Pickard
No, that makes it better. Like I say, the end is excellent. |
by Ben Pickard
Excellent, insightful piece about the arrogance of man - I absolutely love the blunt, quick end - dramatic in a very dramatic piece. Excellent. |
Thank you :) I was inspired by the work of another poet scot cole. I read a piece of his and thought, damn sometimes these religious pieces, if written correctly, can be really good. So I decided to try my hand :) you don't think it's too blunt? |