Comments : And there was life

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent, insightful piece about the arrogance of man - I absolutely love the blunt, quick end - dramatic in a very dramatic piece. Excellent.

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thank you :) I was inspired by the work of another poet scot cole. I read a piece of his and thought, damn sometimes these religious pieces, if written correctly, can be really good. So I decided to try my hand :) you don't think it's too blunt?

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    No, that makes it better. Like I say, the end is excellent.

  • 9 years ago

    by Claire Morris

    I really love this poem. It's wonderful.

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thank you claire for taking the time to read and comment on my work i appreciate that.