A dramatic and thoroughly effective little piece. I love the last line.

Michael,

These words are few, and leave a lot to fill in by the reader and with a subject like this, that may be for the best.

Mind totally set.

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This denotes suicide, so immediately the reader knows the persona must be desperate and determined
Loaded, barrel spun, mouth wide -

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Very clear mental image, the mentioning of the mouth being opened wide made me want to do something to stop it from happening!
Inserted, cocked - click.

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Very abrupt, clean and precise, just like these sort of endings are.....

Well executed poem, well chosen format.

5/5 Ingrid x