This is an excellent piece - well written.

There are some spelling/grammatical errors in this poem, and I do not know if it is my place to tell you these. I will tell you them just in case you want to fix them, but it is ultimately up to you because it is your poem.

Second line: "long" should be "longer"
Fifth line: "burn" should be "burned"
Sixteenth line: "bustard" should be "bastard"

I don't exactly know the whole background to this poem, but it seems like it is something personal. I am sorry if this has happened to you, because I don't think any child should be treated like this by their own father.

If the last part is your mission statement for this life, I think it is a pretty noble one. We need more people like that in this world, because this world can be a wicked one.

Great piece.