Once upon a never

by Dancing Rivers   Jul 23, 2015


Once upon a never, i was free.
Once upon a never i was innocent and gay.
Once upon a never i had a happy childhood.
Once upon a never i was understood.

Once upon a time, I ran away to a bright new day.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I think we have all been here in this moment, and felt this way.

    Short, but expresses an emotion felt within that moment!

    Great!

  • 9 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    Sad but hopeful. A lovely piece. I do hope it all works out for you.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    *"to a bright new day" maybe?

    Anyway, I love this piece as sad as it is, although the last line promises hope. Powerful stuff. I love the switch from "never" to "time", which, as above, is the crux of the hope in the poem.

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thanks ben. i feel like im creating false hope but false hope is better than none i suppose

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