Comments : The Monster of Depression (Brevette)

  • 9 years ago

    by Hellon

    In my opinion...this is too short to be considered as a poem...thought provoking as it as so...I'm wondering (not familiar with this form so thank you for bringing it to light) are you allowed to expand on it, as in a string sentry for example? I just think the thought has to go deeper...hope you understand what I mean?

    • 9 years ago

      by GB

      Hmmm I think you are right there, I searched for more information about it but couldn't find more than this. Searching for a subject in of itself is challenging.

      At least this is something shorter than any poem to get bored of hahaha... Thank you for your review.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I think this is a clever effort - I always admire poets who tackle the shorter forms - I often struggle with those!

    • 9 years ago

      by GB

      Thnaks Ben. I like the short forms too, great exercise for the brain.