Comments : Being a psycho

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    "Being a psycho
    trees of black
    cities of grey
    the lifeless bodies of our preys
    the empty veins of the dead."

    ^^ WHOA! This is one hell of an intro. I love the flow here and the power of your voice. The style is interesting and works well to bring this piece to life, it's open and accepting of your anger/pain.

    The next few lines have interesting perspective but they don't really grip me the way the beginning did. However, the way you feel is clear and almost enticing as you go about describing it to us. Not welcoming but rather interesting and it left me thinking.

    Well written, very interesting.