Hey, this is actually really good. I only say that 'cause I'm not used to short pieces being so wonderful, especially when you're trying to include so many little things (prompts). I think you achieved a seamless flow and a wonderful grip on the reader, leaving them thinking.

Great piece. Very well done.

Saw this on the club thread and loved it there - a clever weaving of lots of different prompts

I think that all of the prompts fit nicely together in this little poem. Usually, in little poems such as these, not all of the prompts fit together. However, I think this fit excellently.

Congrats on winning the challenge.

Great piece.