by Everlasting Jul 30, 2015
category :
Love, romance /
first love
At the Shore . . . |
by Z
The imagery was beautiful. And I think the meaning here is about saying hello for the first time. The wave is a metaphor towards a person maybe? But the repatition works well here to me. I agree with the other commenter in saying that the flow was great. |
by Ben Pickard
I love this and love the repetition employed throughout. Imagery and flow are excellent. |