A very sweet one!

At first I didn't really understand but after re-reading I get it now.

Like a mini story! Well written! I really enjoyed reading this.

keep it up!

Great poem here with lots of energy!

This was a fun read honestly, I love the rhyming throughout it, it's kind of like a childhood rhyme - I mean I can see it being one.

It's really vivid in the way you have put the words on the paper (internet) because they just JUMP out to the reader so easily. It's truly a poem which you can imagine realistically due to the cheekiness of children.

I love the interaction between mother and daughter as well as the game they're both playing with each other. Reminds me of my nephews in a way.

Truly brought a smile to my face, one which I need so thank you. I will try to read more of your work in the coming days.

Keep it up!
5/5

Alliteration is fun and if it's going to be used so blatently, it needs to be a fun piece too, in my opinion, and this truly is a fun read.

Hope you are well, Lucero