Patio Patois
by Larry Chamberlin Jul 31, 2015
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Darkness echoes cicadas, |
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9 years ago
by Sunshine
Melded in languages ? this is amazing. Your opening lines were so beautifully worded. I dont really know what challenge that was but you definitely seem like you have penned it perfectly.
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9 years ago
by Mr. Darcy
Hello Larry,
I like what you have penned here. First stanza a fabulous image of a plethora of sounds. The final one though: it masterfully clever and funny to boot. A Nightingale, a bird out of both time and place. I like the way the headlights do this and then the affect caused silences the others (I like to think) with the jaw dropping melody. I liken it to a rap battle image.
Well done indeed.
Michael-
9 years ago
Thank you, Michael. A rap-off is a clever analogy. My father used to say that a Cat Bird could imitate every other bird except a Mockingbird, and a Mockingbird could imitate a Cat Bird. The streetlights in cities and suburbs across the world actually do have a negative impact on song birds.
"City lights are altering the basic physiology of urban birds, suppressing their estrogen and testosterone and changing their singing, mating, and feeding behaviors."
<http://news.nationalgeographic.com/news/2014/09/140904-loss-night-birds-hormone-sing-light-winged-warning/>
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