Hello Meena,

I have not come across this form before. I must say, it looks attractive and a challenge to write well.

I will read it now...

You
have erased
my bleak moments with
a touch of your compassion,
^
Life is funny really. Just when humanity deals itself a blow, or a person lets another down, that is when just around the corner a good deed is done and the injustice is cancelled out.

Now...
^
A good idea to use this joining word to go onto the next.

I cry with a whole heart not
wanting to loose
this special
bond;
^
This is a super way to describe honest emotion. For is it not through honesty that we are truly heard!

Changed
is my life
for I can with peace
walk in the shade of your heart,
^
There are moments where another's actions can cause momentum to alter. These line breathe love and trust perfectly.

And...
without been judged or questioned
feelings can rest in
your open
arms.
^
As I mentioned above, love and trust creates a love that unconditional. This is the kind of love that can allow a person, a couple, a family to grow and move forward healthily.

A very good write and a new one to me.

Take care,

Michael

A clever piece and very well written.

I love this. While reading this piece all I could think was love as love is compassionate, understanding, and much more.

Wow !!!! With the passing times .........the bonds of love strengthening .........compassion brings in peace and tranquility.........Wonderful piece with an amazing form .
Meena you are so talented:)

Meena what a beautiful poem....I love seeing and reading all the different forms of poetry...

Changed
is my life
for I can with peace
walk in the shade of your heart,
And...
without been judged or questioned
feelings can rest in
your open
arms.

These words really touched my heart it is such a good feeling to have someones unconditional love where you can be yourself and they make you feel so secure and safe.
excellent job on the form.
Lov Cindy

Meeeeeena!!!!! WOW!

I love it when you write like this, you have such a beautiful control over language and this is juuuuust Wooooonderful!!!

You have a way of painting so much emotion and imagery when you write that it just engulfs the reader so much....when the heart speaks you just can't help but stop and listen.....Beautiful!