So Today (etheree )

by Brookie   Aug 6, 2015


So
Today
I realized
It's all a dream;
I'm not in your plan
Like you are in my own,
That there is no future here
And that i have to let you go.
But even though this is our goodbye
I will always remember our hello.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    This is a sad write, there's something about a reluctant goodbye that hits home with me, I'm a big fan of this form, its not easy to get it flowing right and i thought you did a great job with it, your flow and word choice was great :)

    "But even though this is our goodbye
    I will always remember our hello. "

    ^^^^^ this is a great line but heartbreaking too :(

    Very sad but great Etheree.

  • 9 years ago

    by Shruti

    It's really lovely, though very sad.
    Goodbyes are really painful; but we need to move on.
    Stars can't shine without darkness, and same goes for us too.
    Very well written.

  • 9 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    Sad but beautifully done

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A sad and powerful write. well done.

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