Happy

by Something Diabolical   Aug 7, 2015


Smile and be carefree in all that you do
Live for the moment and it will live for you
Join your friends and family along this long winding road
Follow your path and dance with the flow
With a positive mind, happiness will find you

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  • 9 years ago

    by Z

    There are so many things to like about this poem. First of all the flow is poetic and majestic. The message of the poem will warm a lot of hearts because happiness is there in our hands but we just have to find it. The rhyming is beautiful here as well.

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Really like this one:)

    Great tempo and flow etc to it but....

    "Smile and be carefree in all that you do
    Live for the moment and it will live for you"

    ^^^^ one of my favourite opening lines of any piece :)) Awesome!

  • 9 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    I found this poem less like a poem but more like a motto or a quote that just didn't fit in the quote part of the site, since many poets have done this before, I know I have.

    Besides that little tibit that will be/won't be true I found this beautiful in it's simple way of saying don't let anything get you down because you have others that are there to help you along the way.`

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I like the optimism in this piece.

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Smile,
    carefree,
    Live for the moments,
    Friends and family,
    dance ,
    positive mind,
    happiness.

    Plain but with twisted colorful words

    I love it.

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