by Ben Pickard
A lovely poem Cassie - again with a lovely, unforced flow. |
by BlueJay
I liked this when I was reading and counting words the other day, but now that I'm actually taking it all in, I really like it. I think you tried a bit too hard with the rhymes, but otherwise this is great. It truly is how to be happy, suggestions, but still it makes the reader smile just thinking about themselves doing these things. Nicely penned. |
I really enjoyed reading this one and I even do one of these to cheer myself up! |
by Alex
I am on who lingers in dreams so had a smile when i read that line.. also could not agree more about spending a moment out in nature.. she really can rid you of some negative feelings |
by Hellon
What a charming little poem...so glad I found this one! It just reminded me of the movie Mary Poppins for some reason...absolutely loved it :) |
by Naughtymouse
Cassie this is a very cool write :) your word choice for it was flawless! It has a certain charm that when you read it you can't help but smile:) |
by Baby Rainbow
This is so sweet, it is so true that we often wait for happiness to magically appear and find us, where we should be finding it for ourselves. You have listed some small ways that people often find this for themselves, as it is different for everyone, but you have worded this poem so well, and especially for being in limited words! |
by DarkLight
Simply amazing. |