Great flow and rhyme to this piece. well done.

Love the slow down at the end.

Good rhyming poem, they seem to be making a comeback.

I actually moaned at my wife the other day for finishing my sentences.
She replied
'what do you expect we have been together 18 years'

great write

Lovely little poem..
Only thing I can think of is you should have wrote 'Your laugh is like a song to me' instead of 'you laugh is like a song to me' :)

Woah.
This is miraculous.
Holy crap. I love this!!!