Comments : Love conclusion

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a brilliant, emotionally charged piece full of wonderful, thoughtful lines. Left me with a lump in my throat! Excellent

    • 9 years ago

      by Meme

      Aah thanks a lot for your sweet words Ben :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Rabea JAdallah

    Powerful write meme

  • 9 years ago

    by Hellon

    Meme...I've missed reading your work...this is another piece that I love...it has this melancholy feel about it that you are so good at bringing forth. Just one thing I noticed...

    Pushing not pulling was our
    definition of survival, but no
    more. Being constant opened
    my eyes to see, circles will
    always continue indefinitely

    Being constant opened
    my eyes to see
    ^^^
    This didn't read properly to me??

    Anyway...read it over again yourself...still very worthy of a 5/5