Self Acknowledgement

by Sunshine   Aug 8, 2015


You're made of seeds, of soil and stone,
you're of life, of flowers- from flesh to bone.
The vigorous colors in their mobile state;
you're every raw character in its wild trait.
A green tongue growing apart from the trunk,
a flock of fleeing leafs; all wheezy and drunk.
Soaked in salt and washed in sweet wine,
You are every letter abandoning its line...

By: Rania Moallem

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  • 9 years ago

    by Z

    What a great poem!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    As Ben ssays below "You are every letter abandoning its line" - absolutely superb, and thoroughly good throughout

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Nothing short of amazing Nananomnom, such a great opening line and Wow, it's nice to see you rhyme so effortlessly, each word just flows into the next :)

    "Soaked in salt and washed in sweet wine,
    You are every letter abandoning its line..."

    ^^^^^^^^Right here, CrAzY gOoD eNdInG!!!!!

    Great word choice and tempo, Epic :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Haha benbenebnebon thank you (: flatttering *$%##*

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