Comments : The Insidious

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent piece and I love the layout and short stanzas used here.

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    For there is much to see that what meets our eyes.

    - I this line would be better as:

    for there is much MORE to see THAN what meets our eyes.

    It doesn't quite make sense the way you have it.

    But a great inspiring write, life is hard, but hold on, stay strong and have faith as it will get you through and offer you what you wait for.

    Great write

    • 9 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thanks Baby Rainbow, actually I read it today, promised to correct it when I get home.
      Thanks for the kind comment.