When You Think
by jakobe wolf Aug 9, 2015
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When you think you're all alone |
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8 years agoby Em
This is such a sweet poem and shows that the bond between sisters is a much stronger one. I for one know as I have to elder ones :)
On the third stanza you wrote 'when you think they're better off then you could ever be' and I think you should have written 'when you think they're better off THAN you could ever be'
