Very nice job in writing this piece. The flow and wording of the poem was great. I throroughly enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work and take care.
Kind regards,
Kristina

I really liked it, I think that just about everyone can relate. Good piece, keep it up.
Sherry Lynn

Wow - i liked this short but very straight to the point and still a full story told - i love your poems your an inspiration holly and thank you soooo much for your feedback - i always return the favour keep up the great work and thanks again!!!