Very romantic and nostalgic wording here, Samia. The right format for this message.

In your words I read total submission to the other person, a love so deep, there is no way back. I love the dramatic tone!

Well done,

Ingrid xx

The first word that came to mind as I read this was elegant. This is so beautiful and soft, full of longing and love.

I agree with Ingrid, reading a total submission to the other person. That makes this poem that much more loving and gracious. Beautiful, beautiful poem. Love that you chose this form, too!

I always enjoy reading poetry that is very different to my own. This was soft, romantic and very beautiful. I feel like I've taken a trip back in time or have picked up a poetry book by one of the greats. It's very rare I enjoy poetry on this site that is written in a more "traditional way", but this piece was elegant and made me smile.

This poetry form is a nice once to be able to create short pieces, and I think you did it justice. This poem is a depiction of pure love and dedication and I couldn't have depicted it better myself.

What a beautifully elegant little poem, Samia, written in a form I admit to never having heard of.
Well done - this is excellent.
All the best, Ben