Hidden Conditions

by Baby Rainbow   Aug 12, 2015


My promise of love
came with no hidden conditions,
no secret time restrictions written in small print;
they simply came straight from my heart.

I never asked you to love me-
that choice was yours alone,
however, I did ask you not to love me
if there was a chance you would give up and walk away.

But you convinced me to take a chance
in a sea of sharks, and trust someone
for one last time -

and as I sit here,
picking up all of the pieces of my broken heart,
I wonder why after building up all of my walls,
what made you so different
that I let you knock them down?

Saffie
24

30/7/15

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a heart breaking piece, Saffie. The last two stanzas are so emotional. The first two are read in almost nervous anticipation of what is to come, and then it builds into this crescendo of heartbreak. Sad, but beautifully written. Excellent stuff.