I love the rhyme scheme used here. You don't see it all that often - I always find it quite hard. Brilliant poem. Well done.

Great write. The rhyming scheme flows well and is very impressive. Very well done :)

I was not fond of the rhyme scheme here tbh. I mean the flow is nice but it seems forced. But the meaning of the poem is great. The meaning of the poem seems to be about love and maybe you are in love with this person, but another girl wants him too. That is what I think the meaning is.