This is spectacular, and really touching. Amazing title and closing line combination. Really love this piece..
thank you for sharing.
Much love sugar tree <3

What a thoroughly excellent piece of work. The wording is superb. Well done.

Ugh the metaphors here are deep and the meaning of the poem is also deep. We all have sadness and darkness within our souls and heart. That is what poetry is all about, the releasing of feelings and emotions onto paper. This is such a beautiful poem

I love how easily this tells it's story and grasps the readers at all the perfect times. The title is definitely unique - you're so great with titles I'm kind of jealous :)

And your ability of making such simple pieces purely stunning is excellent. Another touchingly phenomenal write.

Flat out nominated for once again something that makes me both smile and sad at the same time.....i love the fisherman and his poetry x big loves sister x