Feelings Pt.1

by TheMask   Aug 21, 2015


My dearly beloved
Our light outshines the darkness
The shadows of this world
It bends to our will
The fears, tears, uncertainty
Resolves in me at your touch, your whisper
But don't fret, I will be there
So keep your head held high
The dream in your eyes
Will come to life
None can dam our overflowing feelings
So stay strong, my beloved
You're the golden star that shines my path
Just look inside to see the brilliance
Shining brighter than the sun
You sit atop the heavenly throne
And shower your love onto everyone
Just like you do for me

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  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I like the simple imagery in this and the unique uses of syntax. Great style, nice job of flow, and above all else, you did an excellent job wrapping us up in the love you have for this person.

    Great piece!

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    I have just read this poem. The lightness and honest affection is well balanced throughout. The use of internal rhyme and the structure. More than this perhaps is the use of the word 'beloved' this is not seen as often as you think, or at least as much as I would think. Beloved = to love: bi-, be- + loven
    ^
    This show a love for another, a pure and honest love. Feelings indeed!

    Well done - I will read the 2nd part now.

    Take care,

    Michael

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