Comments : Half Past Four

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Half past four sounds like it's going to be a wonderful time of day. And what a superb write full of wonderful creativity and thought. Well done.

    • 9 years ago

      by M Nioni

      It's supposed to be a list of impossible things.
      I based it off the old poem Tonight At Noon.
      I always appreciate your feedback Ben.

  • 9 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    A beautiful utopian message. Great write :)

    • 9 years ago

      by M Nioni

      I appreciate you taking the time to figure out all the craziness of it.

  • 9 years ago

    by DarkLight

    This is amazing awesome and great.

    • 9 years ago

      by M Nioni

      Thank you. It took many edits to get it where it was.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    This is brilliant, philosophy, spirituality, satire, pop-culture and romance all in one mind blowing piece. well done, nominated

    • 9 years ago

      by M Nioni

      You are too kind to me! I don't want to start having a big head. I appreciate you words. :)