by Scott Cole Aug 21, 2015
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
She's known the World over |
by Ben Pickard
Much better, Scott - means the whole poem flows really well now. Good change and glad I could help. |
by Ben Pickard
This is an excellent piece, but the fact that lines 2 and 4 don't rhyme in the 3rd stanza to keep the rhyme pattern threw me a bit, to be honest. Aside from that, love it. |
by Scott Cole
I made a change see what u think thanks for your input and yeah when I wrote it that was the one part that bothered me too. |