by Darren Aug 25, 2015
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Six billion different souls intertwine - |
Very well written poem, I wished I could read the version before the edit so I can compare but really, this is a great piece and very well put together. |
by Darren
Thanks Joey |
by Koan
This is one long poem and to be honest I try to stay away from but you have captivated me from the first line so I am here to say ~enjoyed the read~ Thx! |
I made this rather long winded comment on the forum thread, but begged Darren to resubmit the poem so i could place it here. |
by Darren
Thanks for such a great comment, you have captured most of what I was trying to say in this piece. |