Life

To be honest, you could have written a little more. I mean there should be one more stanza just like the middle one. But still it's indeed a good write. Especially the ending you have given to it. I just love the ending.

Great poem.

What a lovely write with a wonderful last stanza. Excellent and all the very best,
Ben

Cindy so good to see a comment from you after a long time .This poem was improvised by Meena.
Credit goes to her .
Hugs

Alka
it has been a long time since I have got to read any poetry. I really enjoyed this.

This universe called life,
is a vast ocean in which
we survive;

Seems like no matter what life throws our way we find a reason to fight to survive. Very intense feelings coming from your words.

lessons are earned and
we return it to spread
its words...
just like a speck of dust
we kick from our feet
returns to earth
the place of its birth;

There are so many life lessons to learn....no matter how old we get we are still learning.

Rejoicing the pleasure
of giving what we reap
like tiny dew drops falling
off a leaf.

This stanza really touched my heart....we seem to be giving something to someone all our life.

Great job!
*hugs
Love Cindy