Comments : For my sister

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    I can feel the tears in your words.

    "My sister my mentor my role model my friend
    Life cut too short an abrupt end
    For you I will forever spend
    Questioning searching hoping to mend "

    I have a three sisters and the thought of losing one of them breaks my heart.
    Hopefully with time you will heal some of the hurt. I lost my husband 14yrs ago...and you never forget.

    Excellent Job!
    Take care Cindy

  • 8 years ago

    by VP Cruz

    "Carry through life, experience the incredible . Without even thoughts of the inevitable. We all must understand, our existence is brief. An unacceptable part of life, all cannot conceive". I understand if life was well lived...but taken prematurely. I too felt your tears.

  • 8 years ago

    by VP Cruz

    "Carry through life, experience the incredible . Without even thoughts of the inevitable. We all must understand, our existence is brief. An unacceptable part of life, all cannot conceive". I understand if life was well lived...but taken prematurely. I too felt your tears.

  • 8 years ago

    by Shruti

    Ow this is so heart breaking...losing a beloved one, but still beautifully written with the beautiful choice of words. Nice.
    ~S

  • 8 years ago

    by nancy

    Heartbreaking yet beautifully written.
    i hope ur family gain strength to overcum da loss