by Alexis Aug 31, 2015
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
She fears |
by Sunshine
Very authentic and raw. Both the opening stanza and the closing one had the same impact on me. I thought they were written beautifully. |
Love this poem! It has raw, open emotion where you aren't shy to speak for this girl, almost acting as her voice when she may be ignored. The simple repetition of "love her, love her" is so gentle and caring. The first stanza is mysterious yet makes me imagine a girl trying to find her own way, not sure what to make of her dark thoughts, hoping for some relief in her daily life. |