Nadia firstly welcome to pnq its so good to see you here!! :)

I really like this write, you created a piece with such a strong emotion flow with great word choice and format, this left me pondering and wanting to read more. 5/5 beautifully writte .

BEN PICKARD YOU MIGHT WANNA READ THIS!

Like they say, better to live it all then never. I like the boldness of your voice which radiates in this write and I also like the spirit in which you have chosen to live life. An inspirational write for sure!

Hello,

this is...

Pure genius and poetry wrapped up in a neat little bow.

Well done for the win.

Take care,

Michael

Real word flowing through you. great flow of poetry. i like it. i love it.
5/5

Thank you so much. I have put a lot of thought into this poem, so I'm really glad that you like it <3

Ben (Naughtymouse) - have done as you asked and am in awe of this piece. The rhythm and flow are truly exceptional - a deserved win.
Well done.

JUDGING COMMENT:

This poem has a positive tone and while reading it
I also got a sense of enlightenment on behalf of
the poet. A feeling that this has been experienced
and life's lesson has been tasted. This ending:

without the need, to crave for more
to have cared, and loved it all

^^I simply like this closing. This is what living life
to its maximum and taking the step of going through
it rather then stepping back means. A sense of fulfillment arises when we don't have to crave
and yearn for things. A sigh filled with peace allows
us to depart this world with a smile.

An inspirational write to grab life by its reins and
ride it! Well done and welcome to the site!

Oh the title and the poem bond.

Such persistence, strength, determination, hope and Will.

Fond of the repetition of I will, in some cases it might through the reader off, but I really felt the will in your repetition.
The determination is crystal clear.

This poem is inspiring and easy for general readers to relate, and for target readers to be touched.

Well done and thanks for sharing.