This is so true Ken! Sometimes I dream of losing someone in my sleep and when I wake, the relief is indescribable! Dreams can steal some very important things from you!
Excellent write, Ken.

Thanks Ben, I think sometimes what you fear in the day may come back to haunt you at night in your dreams as you said. I also had those experiences with much relief when my eyes open. I thought you would like the surprise ending that from the beginning he was dreaming. Regards, Ken

Often in my dreams I've lost someone dear to me and then when I woke up it still seemed so real. I think dealing with daily troubles haunt us at night. Ken you did a beautiful job with this poem. Add to my fav

Amazing!

Perfect spacing! beautiful to look at and wonderful to read. It's filled with emotion and takes the reader on a journey with you to how it felt to have such a nightmare. Unpredictable in every part.

5/5 :)