But soft

by Dancing Rivers   Sep 2, 2015


But soft does my heart break to see,
the beauty in your misery.
When evening's plight- the sun doth seal-
what bitter joy shall we reveal?

Tender hatred warms your smile,
when nature births something vile.
Satyrical sincereity, bleeds through your veins.
My love -society- I wish you'd fade away.

But soft, I must rekindle this ice,
and set alight the soil of your delight.

To bring about a truthful deception.

Perhaps my own redemption.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Made me jealous of this one Hazel. Two stunning pieces in a row.

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Haha ben you're a banana! :) but thank you :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Have to agree with Cassie on this one...beautiful, this has such a wonderful flow and I really, REALLY, like how the words you use are soft and hard...

    "Tender hatred warms your smile,
    when nature births something vile."

    ^^^^^ I adore this, like i say soft and hard and the outcome is wonderful!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    Poetic perfection. I love the 'old world' feel to this created not only by your choice of wording but also by the rhyme and flow. This one is definitely going in my favourites. :)

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