Comments : What abuse can do. (When the card cracks)

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent piece.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Oh please do continue, this is brilliant, it gave me goosebumps as I related to it so much from personal experience

    • 9 years ago

      by Nadia Selmann Casia

      Thank you so much. I wrote it from personal experience my self :) I think the poem is done now. I hope you like it :)