Hello,

if I received this I would know instantly how you felt. The eyes are mirrors of the soul and it is said that you can see the honest intentions by looking into them. Offering to this person to do this is testament of your true feelings.

Well done,

Michael

p.s. I have played around with the format just to show one of many possible options. Up to you of course, your format is super too.

Yes! It's true...if you believe
If you believe that's true...
If you look deep into my eyes
you will surely see
the love I have for you.

you will be able
to see the care,
the concern and
the feelings I got for you

If you only believe
your love for me is true
only then will you
be able to see
when you look into my eyes
the deep true love

I have for you...