This was so intense and very fast in pace too....I felt myself becoming quite breathless to get to the end to see what happened and...well, I smiled in surprise because my mind had gone completely down the wrong path...I thought you were talking about waking and fighting the need to take a leak lol!!! or something else perhaps :)

Thoroughly enjoyed this one.

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Forgot to mention that I thought the layout to be very fitting for this verse...just added some more intensity for the reader :)

Should I rename you 'Master of suspense', Michael?
You built up the tension so cleverly in this piece to then leave the reader breaking out in laughter. So cleverly done, hats off!

((hugs))

This is brilliant!!! The layout, content, hilarity! just.....excellent - cheered me no end!