Comments : Thing

  • 9 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    I have the belief this person is both loved by you and frustrates the hell out of you. Too much saccharin idol worship for you to stomach, and yet the attraction, ... it is certainly real, if, perhaps, they would let it be real, and let you be real, instead of the image they have carved out of balsa wood dreams: too fragile to stand up to a true relationship, to easily broken in times of stress.

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Love and woman been viewed as an object of desire and to be something more then to be appreciated for who
    she really is. Though passionate a suffocating
    relationship is the picture painted within this write.

    Your poems always have a voice to reach out and grab the readers and pull them into your world..