by Cindy
William what a beautiful piece you have penned. |
by Ben Pickard
As Cindy says, this is a lovely, neat piece with a great rhyming flow and lovely sentiment. Well done. |
by Meena Krish
I've read this a countless time yet am unable to comment upon it...still am; I guess some poems are meant not to comment upon because the deeper meaning of it will lose itself in translation :) |
Agree with all above,the essence of this beautiful piece is : |
by Meena Krish
I just had to come back to read this again...then again have been reading it a lot...its just so heartfelt...hope you are penning some more beautiful poems! |
by Meena Krish
Came back to re-read this ...hoping to see a new poem from you! |